I am new to fanfic. I was sad when the final movie came out and frustrated with Ms. Meyer for not finishing Midnight Sun, I happened upon a fanfic that finished all the books from EPOV. I WAS HOOKED! I have been very picky about what I choose to read and want all cannon. I have started several stories and just quit reading because they don't fit into the world I fell in love with. I usually only read stories from EPOV and have not been interested in Nessie or Jacob much. This is my first post-breaking dawn story so I wanted to read some before I posted. So far... I love it! You are an excellent writer and I have been on the edge of my seat! I'm a high school science teacher and fell in love with the Twilight series (books) when my students couldn't put them down. I figured I would read the books to help relate to them better. Lets just say, a lot a grading went undone. :) Thank you for all this hard work! I will update as I read more. Please respond so I know I'm not wasting my time commenting.  If possible, let me know where to go to read your responses. I don't see them on this page. Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I am honored by your kind words. I too was a high school teacher who began reading the books to my kids. (I taught Special Ed.) I too was dissatisfied with Ms. Meyer's lack of ambition in reguards "Midnight Sun." I wrote this story because I was injured at work and off work. My mom challenged me to write a full fledged story. My feeling is if you are writing cannon, then write cannon. I hate stories that blow what is known away. I am so glad that you are enjoying my take on these two. Jacob has ever been my favorite character that I thought got a short shift. I liked the characters and enjoyed playing in Ms. Meyer's sandbox. My later stories take the characters and put them in human situations. So you would probably not like them. But please continue to review, and I will continue to respond. I answer each and every review. So please feel free to comment.

Crossing my fingers for a sequel!

Just sending you a friendly nudge in hopes that you simply need a spark in order to bless us with a new chapter.  :-)

Hi again! :)

I just finished this story and it was totally brilliant! I mean the characters were totally in character, a trait that some canonical stories tend to overlook, and yet your creativity gave them a completely fresh feel. :) Jake and Nessie's story here made me alternatively sniffle and laugh as Nessie and everyone around her is put through the wringer of an extraordinary childhood. I also LOVED your treatment of the relationship between Bella, Edward and Jake, you let a relationship that has all the makings of awkwardness develop and retain the uniqueness it deserves, as Bella and Edward perfectly balance themselves in their dual identities as Nessie's parents and Jake's friends. :)

All in all, thank you for another brilliant story and please update the duke and the dove soon! ;)

 

p.s. I'm starting The Courtesan tomorrow and so see you on the other side! :)

Author's Response:

Wow! I am humbled by your words. My whole thought behind this story was that I so loveed the characters that I wanted the story to continue. Had I not maintained their integrity I would have veiwed it as a complete failure and might never have written again.

 

Thank you for validating my efforts.

 

Hope you like Courtesan, it is completely different than this one, but I did so love it.

I'm seriously loving the story so far; I've been digging around for a fanfic that had decent grammar and a good storyline and whatnot, and this delivers. I've been craving the 'regular' kind of life the Cullens would have, and love reading about it. I think a story from Bella's POV about vampire life would be awesome coming from you. Good work!

Are you going to write more?

I just finished reading this story and it's the BEST TWILIGHT FAN FICITON I've READ!! HappyCranberry, you're an amazing writer. I had so much fun reading this - great characters, and a really well-thought-out plot! I hope you write more in the future :)

Oh my jeebus! This is not an epilogue! It's a prologue for the sequel! HOW COULD YOU BE SO NEEDLESSLY CRUEL?!?! I want more!

Okay, putting the big dramatic voice away.

Seriously, you had me sobbing with Elijah pleading for Sarah to stay. There HAS to be more of this story and more Jake/Ness! I love Jake/Ness fanfics, but this one...this one takes the cake. By far my absolute fave. You have the best antagonists! They really make for great fics and are so seriously under-utilized by even good writers.

Also, I loved that you put this up on Twilighted as well as FF because Twilighted's black background makes it easier to read these really long, wordy fanfics for hours at a time. FF's white background makes my eyes burn after a few hours.

More, please?

I'm off to read Lost Together now. That won't take me but a few days and then I'll be wanting more Jake/Ness, Eli/Sar, Will/Ali, and Seth/Liv.

I am blown away by this piece.  I read the entire thing as fast as I could, relishing every perfect plot twist and turn.  Honestly,  I am a fan of the mythology of the originals and not only does this perfectly match up, but I think it improves upon it and explains more and becomes darker, lighter, and more interesting.   This reneesmee is perfect, she is different from Bella but still retains the independence and intelligence that makes Bella so appealing as a heroine.  The resolution of the volturi dilemma and other characters we've wondered about, is so clean and encompassing I am just so impressed.  I loved every idea this story offers.  I wish this would be made into the next movie!  

 

Please write more!

Oh no.

Can't wait for more soon.

Alaina

Hi! My name is Camelia and I must say that this is one of the best stories I've ever read...and I read a lot:).I want to congratulate you for your courage and imagination, beacause by reading this I've experienced some powerful feelings and enjoyed myself.Hope you have a sequel because I can't wait to se what happens next!

P.S.:Your choosing of songs is absolutely a-m-a-z-i-n-g!!!

With gratitude,Camy:)

this is really good! every single chapter is so interesting. i bet this is the best story i've ever read about Jake & Nessi.