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Reviewer: JacesGirl (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Breathe Again

Personally I think you should just post it together. I am so excited for the sequel!

Reviewer: JacesGirl (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Breathe Again

Hey so I have never reviewed before, but since you asked nicely. ;) I really love this story. I have read several fanfics about Jacob and Bella, and I have to say that is one is probably my favorite. I love how you have developed the characters, especially how you have brought Bella out of her shell a bit. I kind of don't want Edward to come back. I like how perfect Jacob and Bella are for eachother in this fic. Thank you for writing this. I love it.

Reviewer: kkunselman (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2013 11:46 AM · On: Breathe Again

Oh no! I guess I should check and see when a story has had a chapter submitted last...I've obsessively read this story only to find it's not finished and hasn't been updated in years. Why??? It's such a good story! I'm finding myself forgetting that's it's not actually part of Twilight.

Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 10:44 PM · On: A Blazing Sun

it would be a shame to get this far in to a story and not finish it. i hope that u do. i'D love a sequel.

Reviewer: ShanaEich (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2013 10:42 AM · On: Breathe Again

I think it should be one. I can't wait to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: kel_cullenn (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 05:55 PM · On: Breathe Again

I love love love this story! why did you stop writing? you are brilliant! I couldn't stop reading! What happened to the sequel?

Reviewer: Veronica Venus (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 02:33 PM · On: Breathe Again

So far, I'm really enjoying this. But I'm not sure I like how tearful Bella is all the time...she's always crying or taking a fit, Jake deserves better than that! :)

Reviewer: candledancer (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 02:42 PM · On: Breathe Again

Finish please!!!! Been hanging out there for over a year and the suspense is getting to be too much!

Reviewer: cymoril (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 09:09 AM · On: Breathe Again

I would love to see the last chapter ... please!! finish it!!!

Reviewer: Selena Bellissante (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2013 03:50 AM · On: Breathe Again

I really love your story, I wish that you'd finish it :)

Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 02:47 PM · On: Breathe Again

You haven't updated this story in over two years. Will you be continuing it? I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Breathe Again

Please post the chapters together

Reviewer: HanaMc (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 01:21 AM · On: A Blazing Sun

Really enjoyed reading... Couldn't put down. Can't wait for more chapters!

Reviewer: grftpl17 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 04:07 PM · On: Breathe Again

I loved this story, It held my attention the whole time

Reviewer: MeaganPierce (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 07:56 PM · On: Breathe Again

I would love to see the last chapter soon. I need to know if edward ruins the date or if everything end up fine.

Reviewer: Nerdle (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Breathe Again

Amazing. Keep them coming I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Nerdle (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Breathe Again

Amazing. Keep them coming I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Wpear (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 10:23 PM · On: Breathe Again

I love this story! Please keep going I'm addicted.

Reviewer: O2Shea (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Breathe Again

I decided to check out series on this site and I liked the tongue in cheek way yours was advertised -- very dry sense of humor. My favorite. Sooo... I figured you were worth reading. You are.

Reviewer: O2Shea (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Breathe Again

Solidly enjoying the story. Really like the side views in the one shots -- great idea. You are one of the best fan fic writers I have read. Looking forward to reading more of yours. Saw that several of your stories are not variations on canon but take the characters completely out of their original realm. That isn't really my thing... but I'm sure that they are also well written so I expect I'll give them a read also. KEEP WRITING!!! You are too good to stop and should consider a career in that direction.

Reviewer: tryates (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2012 11:12 PM · On: Breathe Again

I just finsihed all of the chapters. This part was wonderfuly written and I loved wasting my time after work reading the beautiful story you have created.

Reviewer: Llamas123 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 10:57 PM · On: Breathe Again

What is the sequel called and when will it come out???

Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2012 09:22 PM · On: Breathe Again

And here I was thinking that I only read stories that are complete! I have to wait now - crap!!!

But I gotta say, having read this series all in about the last week has been bordering on the obsessive. ;)

Pls post Bella's and Jake's chapters together (or if I'm honest, just Jake's, skip Bella's)

Reviewer: legnalive (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 09:35 PM · On: Breathe Again

Please write soon! I'm dying to read the next chapter. I guess writing it together would be great. I'm sure that you get this all the time, but I'm still going to say it , you are amazing! I not only enjoy the story line, but I love the humor and the natural development! I was glad to see that Bella didn't regress to her miserable self when the Cullen's came and most of all seeing how happy she is making Jake and vs is really what would have picture! Truly I love your writing!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 04:08 PM · On: Breathe Again

I have been reading this streight forthree days now and do no want to stop...post it all together!!!! PLEASE I love this story and can not weitherto see the end.

xanath

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